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Aridecan: /* Mid Chapter Meeting with the Succubus Villainess */

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Mid Chapter Meeting with the Succubus Villainess

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	== Mid Chapter Meeting with the Succubus Villainess ==		== Mid Chapter Meeting with the Succubus Villainess ==
	If Ava gets captured during a mission and Milo has to save her. They'll meet the Succubus and she'll disable Milo. At this time Ava will probably still be naked and tied up to a certain amount and the Succubus will then start to tell Ava the 'truth' about what is going on. Maybe ungagging the magical girl to communicate. And through gentle molestation and even penitration with her tail they'll have their conversation. When the succubus is done, she'll regag Ava because 'she's so cute like that'. And then leave her with a gift of some padlocks for the armbinder, and gag.		If Ava gets captured during a mission and Milo has to save her. They'll meet the Succubus and she'll disable Milo. At this time Ava will probably still be naked and tied up to a certain amount and the Succubus will then start to tell Ava the 'truth' about what is going on. Maybe ungagging the magical girl to communicate. And through gentle molestation and even penitration with her tail they'll have their conversation. When the succubus is done, she'll regag Ava because 'she's so cute like that'. And then leave her with a gift of some padlocks for the armbinder, and gag.

			[[Script: First Meeting the Succubus\|Script]]

	== End Mission ==		== End Mission ==

Aridecan at 16:27, 25 May 2023

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	* Investigate the scream for help in the beginning - Save her roommate Celeste from Slavers/Gang		* Investigate the scream for help in the beginning - Save her roommate Celeste from Slavers/Gang

			== Mid Chapter Meeting with the Succubus Villainess ==
			If Ava gets captured during a mission and Milo has to save her. They'll meet the Succubus and she'll disable Milo. At this time Ava will probably still be naked and tied up to a certain amount and the Succubus will then start to tell Ava the 'truth' about what is going on. Maybe ungagging the magical girl to communicate. And through gentle molestation and even penitration with her tail they'll have their conversation. When the succubus is done, she'll regag Ava because 'she's so cute like that'. And then leave her with a gift of some padlocks for the armbinder, and gag.

	== End Mission ==		== End Mission ==

Aridecan at 23:55, 24 May 2023

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	After they escape, Ava will need to disappear so that her identity doesn't become known to the others. Leaving the slaves to be discovered by the police.		After they escape, Ava will need to disappear so that her identity doesn't become known to the others. Leaving the slaves to be discovered by the police.

			== Assets Needed: ==

			* Generic Female Model
			** Ava's Non-Magical Girl Model
			** Ava's Magical Girl Model
			** Celeste's Model
			** Tina's Model (short girl)
			* Generic Female Head
			** Ava's Non-Magical Girl Head
			** Ava's Magical Girl Head
			** Celeste's Head
			** Tna's Head
			** 5 Generic Heads for NPCs
			* Generic Male Model
			* Generic Male Head
			** 5 Generic Heads for NPCs
			* Ava's Magical Girl Clothes
			* Generic Female Clothing:
			** 5 x bras
			** 5 x panties
			** 5 x shirts
			** 5 x pants/shorts
			** 5 x shoes
			** 5 x coats
			* Female Gang Clothing
			** 3 x tops
			** 3 x bottoms
			** 2 x boots
			* Generic Male Clothing
			** 5 x underwear
			** 5 x shirts
			** 5 x pants
			** 5 x coats
			** 5 x shoes
			* City
			*

Aridecan at 23:35, 24 May 2023

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	== More details on the Goals ==		== More details on the Goals ==
	We want to make sure that her classmates are fully fleshed out, at the minimum is Celeste (her roommate) and the short class mate. Ava is Magical Girl Blue, Celeste is Magical Girl Green, and the Short girl is the first villainess in disguise, and will also become Magical girl Pink in Chapter 6? We want to make the player care about both Celeste and the succubus so that when it comes time to save them (Celest in chapter 2, and The succubus in Chapter 6), that they go and do so without problems. So we'll have to make sure to write some dialog for them. Magical Girl Red will start showing up in Chapter 2, as a rival. Celeste becomes magical girl green at the beginning of chapter 4. Red joins the team at the end of chapter 4. Yellow shows up in chapter 5.		We want to make sure that her classmates are fully fleshed out, at the minimum is Celeste (her roommate) and the short class mate. Ava is Magical Girl Blue, Celeste is Magical Girl Green, and the Short girl is the first villainess in disguise, and will also become Magical girl Pink in Chapter 6? We want to make the player care about both Celeste and the succubus so that when it comes time to save them (Celest in chapter 2, and The succubus in Chapter 6), that they go and do so without problems. So we'll have to make sure to write some dialog for them. Magical Girl Red will start showing up in Chapter 2, as a rival. Celeste becomes magical girl green at the beginning of chapter 4. Red joins the team at the end of chapter 4. Yellow shows up in chapter 5.

			Milo will also keep trying to get Ava to pick up her wand again. And become a Magical Girl. Ava will keep turning them down. She doesn't want to become a magical girl again, besides these are just thugs.

	== Parts of the Hero's Journey ==		== Parts of the Hero's Journey ==

Aridecan: /* Goals */

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Goals

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	# Introduce jobs		# Introduce jobs
	# Introduce her to class		# Introduce her to class
			# Introduce the escape game.

	== More details on the Goals ==		== More details on the Goals ==

Aridecan at 23:24, 24 May 2023

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	== More details on the Goals ==		== More details on the Goals ==
	We want to make sure that her classmates are fully fleshed out, at the minimum is Celeste (her roommate) and the short class mate. Ava is Magical Girl Blue, Celeste is Magical Girl Green, and the Short girl is the first villainess in disguise, and will also become Magical girl Pink in Chapter 6? We want to make the player care about both Celeste and the succubus so that when it comes time to save them (Celest in chapter 2, and The succubus in Chapter 6), that they go and do so without problems. So we'll have to make sure to write some dialog for them. Magical Girl Red will start showing up in Chapter 2, as a rival. Celeste becomes magical girl green at the beginning of chapter 4. Red joins the team at the end of chapter 4. Yellow shows up in chapter 5.		We want to make sure that her classmates are fully fleshed out, at the minimum is Celeste (her roommate) and the short class mate. Ava is Magical Girl Blue, Celeste is Magical Girl Green, and the Short girl is the first villainess in disguise, and will also become Magical girl Pink in Chapter 6? We want to make the player care about both Celeste and the succubus so that when it comes time to save them (Celest in chapter 2, and The succubus in Chapter 6), that they go and do so without problems. So we'll have to make sure to write some dialog for them. Magical Girl Red will start showing up in Chapter 2, as a rival. Celeste becomes magical girl green at the beginning of chapter 4. Red joins the team at the end of chapter 4. Yellow shows up in chapter 5.

			== Parts of the Hero's Journey ==

			* '''The Ordinary world:''' Introduce Ava, and the world she's on. Give it a bit of a back story and why she's here. Get into a bit of a daily routine.
			* '''The Call to Adventure:''' During the introduction, walking through the city to the metro station she hears a cry for help. Being a retired magical girl she runs off to investigate. The mark of a hero, when someone screams they run to the scream not away from it. She'll discover two thugs that are trying to sexually assault a woman her age (19). This will be the introduction to the combat system. Or at least the first part of the combat system. Ava will have some physical attacks from her martial arts training. Kick, punch, and other similar attacks.
			* '''Meeting the Mentor:''' The mentor is with Ava from the start. It's her animal companion, who will try to convince Ava to take up her wand again.
			* '''Refusal of the Call:''' Ava doesn't want to get involved. She spent the last seven years fighting wrath demons. She doesn't want to be fighting anymore. Besides the world already has a Magical Girl, and being a vigilante and cleaning up crime is not her thing. Let someone else do it.
			* '''Crossing the Threshold:''' The lust zombies show up and people are turning into zombies, and the Magical Girl on the planet doesn't seem to be doing anything about it. People she's met at college have disappeared. She reluctantly picks up her wand again

	== Chapter long Missions: ==		== Chapter long Missions: ==
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	* Raid gang bases		* Raid gang bases
	* Raid Slaver bases		* Raid Slaver bases
			* Make money at the Tavern/Bar

			== Individual Missions ==

			* Investigate the scream for help in the beginning - Save her roommate Celeste from Slavers/Gang

	== End Mission ==		== End Mission ==

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 == More details on the Goals ==
 We want to make sure that her classmates are fully fleshed out, at the minimum is Celeste (her roommate) and the short class mate.  Ava is Magical Girl Blue, Celeste is Magical Girl Green, and the Short girl is the first villainess in disguise, and will also become Magical girl Pink in Chapter 6?  We want to make the player care about both Celeste and the succubus so that when it comes time to save them (Celest in chapter 2, and The succubus in Chapter 6), that they go and do so without problems.  So we'll have to make sure to write some dialog for them.  Magical Girl Red will start showing up in Chapter 2, as a rival.  Celeste becomes magical girl green at the beginning of chapter 4.  Red joins the team at the end of chapter 4.  Yellow shows up in chapter 5.
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 Slaves escape 1:30 after the boss battle starts.

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End Mission

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	So Ava needs to get captured, and dragged into the cells with Celeste. Bound, and naked, and then she'll transform and use her magic to get herself untied. Rescue Celeste and anyone else that's been captured, and make it out of the base. Milo will be with her of course and they'll know the way out by following Ava in.		So Ava needs to get captured, and dragged into the cells with Celeste. Bound, and naked, and then she'll transform and use her magic to get herself untied. Rescue Celeste and anyone else that's been captured, and make it out of the base. Milo will be with her of course and they'll know the way out by following Ava in.

			On the way out almost to the end, the boss slaver shows up, and calls out Ava for a one-on-one. The battle can end with:

			* Best: Ava defeats the boss
			* Better: All the slaves escape and Ava retreats
			* Bad: Ava retreats and the slaves are captured
			* Worse: All the slaves escape and Ava is defeated
			* Worst: Everyone is captured again

			Game over screen for Bad through Worst.

			Slaves escape 1:30 after the boss battle starts.

Aridecan: /* More details on the Goals */

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More details on the Goals

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	== More details on the Goals ==		== More details on the Goals ==
	We want to make sure that her classmates are fully fleshed out, at the minimum is Celeste (her roommate) and the short class mate. Ava is Magical Girl Blue, Celeste is Magical Girl Green, and the Short girl is the first villainess in disguise, and will also become Magical girl Pink in Chapter 6? We want to make the player care about both Celeste and the succubus so that when it comes time to save them (Celest in chapter 2, and The succubus in Chapter 6), that they go and do so without problems. So we'll have to make sure to write some dialog for them. Magical Girl Red will start showing up in Chapter 2, as a rival. Celeste becomes magical girl green at the beginning of chapter 4. Red joins the team at the end of chapter 4. Yellow shows up in chapter 5.		We want to make sure that her classmates are fully fleshed out, at the minimum is Celeste (her roommate) and the short class mate. Ava is Magical Girl Blue, Celeste is Magical Girl Green, and the Short girl is the first villainess in disguise, and will also become Magical girl Pink in Chapter 6? We want to make the player care about both Celeste and the succubus so that when it comes time to save them (Celest in chapter 2, and The succubus in Chapter 6), that they go and do so without problems. So we'll have to make sure to write some dialog for them. Magical Girl Red will start showing up in Chapter 2, as a rival. Celeste becomes magical girl green at the beginning of chapter 4. Red joins the team at the end of chapter 4. Yellow shows up in chapter 5.

			== End Mission ==
			Hopefully there have been a bunch of fights with the slavers, and thugs. And maybe Ava getting home in bondage for celeste to help out. One night after a joint shift at the bar/tavern Ava is closing up and Celeste goes out back to toss away some trash. There's a crash, and a scream out back. And when Ava rushes back there she find something of Celeste's and something common from the slaver's gear. Like a ball gag. Making it fairly obvious that Celeste has been captured.

			Ava/The player has the option to try to find Celeste by looking at some of the old bases. Or to talk to Milo and get his help. Milo has been pushing Ava do become a magical girl again in her fights, so the relationship has soured a bit. Milo does agree to help and see if he can find Celeste, and go off. But Milo won't be able to find Celeste till the next day.

			The next day rolls around and Milo tells Ava where Celeste is, and how hard it will be to get to her. Ava will not be able to get to Celeste. Even if Ava became a magical girl again. Without any Purified Mana Gems planted in the area Ava can only support her transformation for about twenty minutes. And that's not enough time to get in, search the place, and get out, especially not with the number of slavers in the base.

			Well what about just getting out? Will there be enough time for her to get out as a magical girl?

			Yes, but how is she going to do that?

			Get captured, and then dragged into the cell or cells where Celeste is and free her, then break out.

			So Ava needs to get captured, and dragged into the cells with Celeste. Bound, and naked, and then she'll transform and use her magic to get herself untied. Rescue Celeste and anyone else that's been captured, and make it out of the base. Milo will be with her of course and they'll know the way out by following Ava in.

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== Conditions ==
'''Entry:''' Start in this chapter

'''Exit:''' Ava has become a magical girl again

== Synopsis ==
Ava comes to a new world after running away from home. She had been a magical girl for 9 years ever since she turned 10 years old, and her magical familiar found here. It was a secret tradition in the family, and she didn't find out about it till she was 13, left to learn the ways of the magical girl on her own in 'secret'. Feeling betrayed, she resolved to leave as soon as she could. After she graduated high school (secondary school) she broke her wand and ran, taking her animal companion with her. She went to a new colony planet to start a new life away from the demons, and the fight. She wants to be a normal girl, fall in love and all that.

== Goals ==

# Introduce Ava
# Introduce the world
# Introduce the school system and why she's an adult and still in school
# Introduce the city
# Introduce movement and how to move around
# Introduce how to buy stuff
# Introduce melee combat
# Introduce her room mate and her class mates
# Introduce jobs
# Introduce her to class

== More details on the Goals ==
We want to make sure that her classmates are fully fleshed out, at the minimum is Celeste (her roommate) and the short class mate. Ava is Magical Girl Blue, Celeste is Magical Girl Green, and the Short girl is the first villainess in disguise, and will also become Magical girl Pink in Chapter 6? We want to make the player care about both Celeste and the succubus so that when it comes time to save them (Celest in chapter 2, and The succubus in Chapter 6), that they go and do so without problems. So we'll have to make sure to write some dialog for them. Magical Girl Red will start showing up in Chapter 2, as a rival. Celeste becomes magical girl green at the beginning of chapter 4. Red joins the team at the end of chapter 4. Yellow shows up in chapter 5.